music producers unite: share your latest productions with the forum at large.

I think that's a good idea.

Yes.

Also, really rewarding to wait until 1:17. :D

This one and Suno thread pls

In my opinion, you've had better productions here, this one is so good that nothing is off key :P. Not my style, but it's nice that you try to go into full forms of songs, not just 30-second short clips.
What I would improve here:
First of all, this thing like bass and melody shouldn't be played on the same synthesizer / sample. It just doesn't blend together nicely.
There is definitely a lack of bass here, it should come in slowly when the drop starts and then drive the entire production, but it simply isn't there here.
Oh, I'm also not a fan of drowning everything in reverb, but there is absolutely no reverb here, and spatial effects are a very important part of electronic music. Some nice reverb, emphasizing the treble and not muddying the mix, e.g. on synthesizers, would be good.



-- (rudolf):
Yes.
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Hi, the synthesizer melody was actually the first one I have written. What it does is switching between the same note played on the same octave, most of the times. There two variations of this, the second iteration of which only is the double speed of the first one. This may be why it sounds like they overlap badly, but this is actually intended and not designed to be a bass. As for the rest, thanks for the feedback. I noticed that with the bass myself but wanted to post this before I begin with it.

A small chiptune loop I made for one of my own productions.

This is a casual, chill thing I played on Noire about 1-2 weeks ago, just letting myself be carried through.

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කුඩු වටිල්ලයක ඉතුරුට කෙන්නේ පහි කැමයකෑ පහසදේ . ඔබේ රැඩියක පෙරුණින්ස් පෙරුණින් කරනේ පහසදේ. පස් අවශ්ය දැන් තෙලා කාවි ප්‍රන් එක මිනිතු ලෙමිසු කිරීමට කිරීම සහ කරන්න, ඉතිය මෙරිණු කිරීමට කිරීම වින්න, ලොම අපි අපි සියලිති වෙන්න සම කරුණාර වෙන්න දැන්න, එකාක් බවාන තියීමට කිරීමට අඩක අපට කරන්න ඔබේ අඩකක්, මිරීමට තියමතිය අඩක කරුණාර වෙන්න.

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This is cool, never heard a beat like that :D