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#361

no auto tune you want, no auto tune you shall get.
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#362 1 like

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ysgrifennu y llythren sy'n gweithio fel ganlyniad pyrus a'r optim ac osod o'r drws I walked across an empty land I knew the pathway like the back of my hand I felt the earth beneath my feet Sat by the river and it made me complete Oh simple being, where have you gone? I'm getting old and I need something to rely on So tell me when you're gonna let me in I'm getting tired and I need somewhere to begin I came across a fallen tree I felt the branches of it looking at me Is this a place? Is this a place? Is this a place? Is this a place we used to love? Is this the place that I've been dreaming of? Oh simple being, where have you gone? I'm getting old and I need something to rely on So tell me when you're gonna let me in I'm getting tired and I need somewhere to begin I'm getting tired and I need something to rely on I'm getting tired and I need somewhere to begin And if you ever need it I'll really know To talk about it somewhere I'll really know You raise to me every day Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Somewhere I'll really know Mae'n rhaid i mi ddweud wrth i mi ddweud wrth i mi ddweud. Mae'n rhaid i mi ddweud wrth i mi ddweud wrth i mi ddweud. Mae'n rhaid i mi ddweud wrth i mi ddweud. Mae'n rhaid i mi ddweud wrth i mi ddweud wrth i mi ddweud. Mae'n rhaid i mi ddweud wrth i mi ddweud wrth i mi ddweud.

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#363

I just noticed it delayed itself, sorry y'all
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#364 1 like

I'm afraid the percussion might be off-key but anyhow it sounds great.

#365 1 like

Hay, well done. It sounds ominess as well.
-- (rudolf):
I'm afraid the percussion might be off-key but anyhow it sounds great.

--
Let the stars be your guide. Let your mind just relax. And when in doubt, meditate.

#366

Thank you. I especially like the end honestly.

#367 1 like

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yeah I like it as well I like music like this sounds almost like electronic house sort of music pretty cool man nice job Rudolph

#368

Thank you. Yeah, I'd also say this sounds like something in between the dark melodies of techno and the beat of house just simplified a little.

#371

There still are a couple of changes I want to make regarding the production, mix and so on but I like this so far.

#372 1 like

I don't want to be the one again, but you need to listen to at least 8 beats of your production and should already notice that one of your loops is in major, and the other in minor. And they might sound the same, but they don't end correctly.

Όταν θα κοιτάς την θάλασσα
Χωρίς να το θέλεις, θα βλέπεις εμένα
Και τα μάτια σου θα ‘ναι θλιμμένα
Όταν θα ξυπνάς στον ύπνο σου
Χωρίς να το θέλεις, θα σκέφτεσαι εμένα
Και θα νιώθεις μεγάλο κενό

#373

Thanks for the feedback. I went through all the clips and used the fit to scale feature of Ableton and no note has changed - are you certain? The only other factor is the chord device applied to the guitar and piano, but this also is set up to track the e major scale from the clip so it shouldn't be able to play anything close to a minor.

#374 3 likes Edited

Generally, it's only about the ends of the piano and lead clips. The lead ends on the subdominant and the piano on the tonic, it is thing for change. And just to be clear, I'm not criticizing you to boost my ego, like some here, but it's actually audible a little dissonance, although in fact, looking at the correctness of the degrees of the E major scale, everything is OK. Unfortunately, it is not a one-size-fits-all, and not everything that is theoretically the sound of a given scale/key fits together. Everything else is absolutely OK :).
Edit: looking further, the dissonance generally occurs between the chord layer and the lead, but it is still the same thing, the lead ends on the subdominant, and the chord layer ends on the tonic.

#375 Edited

Thanks for the explaination! Oh yeah, regarding that I've noticed it too actually, just thought it wouldn't be so audible.

#376

Well... Everything in music production is... Uhm... Audible...

Όταν θα κοιτάς την θάλασσα
Χωρίς να το θέλεις, θα βλέπεις εμένα
Και τα μάτια σου θα ‘ναι θλιμμένα
Όταν θα ξυπνάς στον ύπνο σου
Χωρίς να το θέλεις, θα σκέφτεσαι εμένα
Και θα νιώθεις μεγάλο κενό

#377 4 likes

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Thank you. Thank you.

#378

This is actually more of a test of the guitar that I had the opportunity to play a bit, but I like it. I recorded this a few months ago.

#379 1 like

Hay. I like this song as well. You do very good on your songs.
-- (rudolf):
There still are a couple of changes I want to make regarding the production, mix and so on but I like this so far.

--
Let the stars be your guide. Let your mind just relax. And when in doubt, meditate.

#380

I love the reverb on that guitar as well! Though the strumming of the chords seems a bit aggressive at least to my personal taste lol. Not sure whether it's been recorded like that or that was the vision for the song, but you play really well.
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